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Post by thundertail on Jul 4, 2008 5:30:22 GMT -5
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Post by thundertail on Jul 4, 2008 10:53:12 GMT -5
There's chapter two! ;D This is only the first few scenes! (They go nearly all over the place from there!) Comments about spelling and punctuation? Yeah,... I know!... Other comments? Like it, hate it? Speculation on what happens next? Things you want to see included? Want me to stop writing and just pack it up? (LOL!) Please let me know what you think!...
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Post by Vorchia on Jul 9, 2008 3:01:48 GMT -5
Hi Thundertail, I was skimming over it when suddenly my eye caught a highly unusual phenonemon called a 'malestrom', now it may fit into the 'its raining men' category of warped natural phenomena but I think you may mean 'maelstrom'. ;-)
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Post by thundertail on Jul 9, 2008 16:37:46 GMT -5
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Post by thundertail on Jul 27, 2008 5:13:47 GMT -5
Chapter five check:... Well, the fanfic is really moving along now! Like it? Hate it? (What would Siskel and Ebert think?) Feel free to make comments n' stuff... (I know about spelling... I is gradeeyated from fifth grade! LOL!) _____ Ahem... I suppose you noticed I tried to use as few characters from the books/movies/series as possible. So far only Elana Dennison is used, and I plan on keeping that way - but things might change! Even the mayor of Waterfall City and his citizens are different, even though this fanfic is set in modern times. (Sorry, Waldo!LOL!). As far as it starting slow, ALL my stuff starts out slow, and gets better (I hope!) from there! Enough bending your earslits. On with the fun!... _____
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Post by thundertail on Aug 26, 2008 20:29:00 GMT -5
Here I am again! Had a brief vacation from this fanfic. ;D(Finished 'Empire of the Carnivores'!) ;D But now it's time to continue with this one... The next chapter is nearly done. It'll be here hopefully by tomorrow. Anything you want to see? Anything you DON'T want to see? Spelling? Punctuation? (Should I just get on with it? LOL!) "Let the games continue!..."
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Post by aquila on Aug 27, 2008 1:52:17 GMT -5
So-many-moving icons! The mind, it boggles. So, I read through what you have got so far, and as with before, I have no real complaints. I like where the story is going so far, and of course the writing style is pleasant to the eyes. I am holding you to that whole "tomorrow" thing, btw . I did notice, however, from reading Empire and this one, that you have a very strong affinity to the word "coo." Not that I mind, it is a very phonetically pleasing word, I admit! But, fear not, for I have not looked upon your works with a narrow mind! I noticed you mixed things up a bit, you also used the word "crooned!" (I be messin' with ya, you know?) (Thats 33, 34 if you include the first one, in case you felt like counting!) ~
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Post by thundertail on Aug 31, 2008 20:05:36 GMT -5
Yes, I am truely trying to write this fanfic - don't worry!
My publisher likes the idea I had (See 'post comment, empire of the carnivores'.), and wanted me to start fleshing out the idea.
Now I'm on chapter four of that one, right before it starts getting real wierd!
Sorry if work comes before play!
(Look ma! No smilies!)
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Post by aquila on Sept 1, 2008 1:32:52 GMT -5
Whoa, you have a publisher? Maybe it is just my inexperience with the literary would coming out, but that is pretty sick right there. --Wait, "work?" Do you write for a living? I get that vibe with your post, but then again I don't call this kind of stuff very well. Anyway, no one is rushing you, naturally. Rushed work always shows it, and I'd hate to see that. Also: your post is naked without the smilies. It really is.
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Post by thundertail on Sept 1, 2008 5:06:00 GMT -5
Actually, the publisher is an online one. They call them a 'marketing coach'. Publishing comes when I can pony up the cash to get it done. (Got 2 books published that way!) (She likes the idea, and can't wait to help me get it out there.) The reason I'm writing these fanfics is to get my stuff noticed (Like a calling card.), but mainly it's mostly fun!
My paying job involves delivering auto parts. (Should write about that - makes for a great sci-fi! LOL!) *Thinking of putting smilies here too... Nah...!*
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Post by aquila on Sept 1, 2008 14:19:25 GMT -5
Oh, I see, that makes much more sense. I have to say, though, "marketing coach" sounds much more intriguing than "publisher." I bet they did that on purpose. So, the wip story you mentioned in the last thread was an original ip, I was confused for a bit, but no more. ~
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Post by thundertail on Sept 3, 2008 4:41:26 GMT -5
Ok, ok! Now I'll get busy with this fanfic! I just finished fleshing out that idea. (Up to the point where it gets wierd.) Buzzed it to the marketing coach (No word back yet - takes a while.) Thought of where I could go from there... I had this other idea to make a utopian society like Dinotopia. (Maybe the alien guy is part of it, and the creatures in the whole universe are like that! Maybe they're here to teach the people of earth how to be like that... Just a thought!) I'll outline that later! Well, on with this one!...
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Post by aprentice16 on Sept 6, 2008 17:05:22 GMT -5
okay.... so when are we graced with the actual post?
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Post by thundertail on Sept 6, 2008 20:55:58 GMT -5
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Post by thundertail on Oct 11, 2008 20:57:55 GMT -5
I been posting recently... HONEST!... Hope you like it! I just outlined the next four or five chapters, so maybe they'll come out a lot quicker now. _____ On my wip book... Well, I can't say the actual plot, but it involves a whole universe of aliens that adhere to ideals not unlike the Dinotopian ideals! They try to negotiate with the earth to welcome them to thier ways, introduce them to thier technology and such... Unfortunately, humans and thier unpeaceful mindset muck things up to no end! (The writer guy they needed to speak for them because of humans xenophobia.) Other than that, it'll be out in paperback soon as I get the dough for it!... haspi-vizz!
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