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Dark Twizzler of the Soul
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Dark Twizzler of the Soul,
(aka Ode to a Pink Twizzler)
You look so sad
Laying there on the ground
The ground covered in dirt
and your pink shiny-ness
So clean
So fresh
So
Shiny
and pink
And shiny
And yet you sit there
Like a long abandoned tube of toothpaste
Half squeezed out and left for dead
Or whatever death is for toothpaste
And oh, how I mourn thee
When you once saw the light
And shimmered in the noon-day sun
And now your darker side is shown
As you bask in your dark shroud of
darkness
So very, very dark
And shoved away in the darkest part of the
dark sidewalk in the damp
clouded soil that looks so very
so
very
dark
and sad. and there you sit
shining
with small drops of dew clinging to you
sparkling in the light
but not in the dark
and i think
'oh twizzler-
how I woe thee
I blender theee
bumble'
and then I realize
that though you sit
alone and in the dark
darkly sitting in the
dark
concrete ground
its so cold and youre so
pink
i see that you could be more
so much more, and as I raise you into the light
carefully, watching the sun glisten off your
pink plasticky looking fruit juicy goodness
a sudden gust of wind takes out out of my hands
out of my life
forever
out of my grasp and into the road
where a car runs you down
and there you lay
no longer clean and pink
but dirty, and in a couple pieces
and how I look at thee
and bemoan my bootless state
and then another car runs you over
and I turn away in sadness
how I loved thee
-Brought to you by the one, the only, the infamous
FireBane the deep
"Laugh and frolick in your vile meats of evil- MEATS OF EVIL!! But know that vengence will be mine-oh how it will be mine!!" -Zim
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::jaw hangs slack.blinks.rubs nose.blinks.sniffs.collapses into heaving sobs:: Such Pathos; such shiny goodness runned over before it's expiration date...
I award this work the unheard of "Genius of unfathomable Stupidity" seal of disgruntled poems.
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Right...
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*Checks crayon packet*
Right, I though so.. that's it fire stay out of my rainbow coloured crayons, you can't handle them!! Lol.
Poor, poor, poor twizzler.. was it raspberry or strawberry? Or maybe cherry? It's a shame it kinda got run over... but once again fire you neevr cease to amaze on your poetry skills and O' how much time you must have to yourself lol.
~Leafers~
"Before humans destroy the planet?" Ellie asked.
Malcolm sighed, and closed his eyes.
"Oh dear," he said.
"That's the last thing I would worry about."
~Ian Malcolm
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And yet, stragely ironic. Like Brazil.
Um, never mind.
ShadowStriker
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Re: Dark Twizzler of the Soul
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Very creative, FireBane. I love how you took something so innocuous as a twizzler and composed such a melodramatic poem. Brilliant!
How can we be so different and feel so much alike?...How can we feel so different and be so much alike? -- from Stellaluna
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Reviving a topic-
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Cause apparently me prose is being shown up- I must defend my reputation (or lack thereof...or lower it more)
I bet Cheez-E board will ruin my formatting, but 'tis no matter, it's the content that matters, right? I present you with:
A room with a moose
::cue more dramatic music::
Room with a Moose
Hear the bull moose in the forest
Crazy moose!
The world of rumbling grunts he makes
As he wades through marshes and lakes
How he snorts snorts snorts
And he sports sports sports
Running madly through the spray
Of the tides he seems to say
Splashing water everyway
That he’s the crazy moose!
With a deranged and mad delight
That causes wild birds to take flight
With a rustle
And a bustle
Of loose pinions in the light
Hear his mad incessant mutter
Hear him honk and hear him mutter
Bizarre sounds that are no other
Then imitations of a bus!
From his shadows he went running
With all the wits and all the cunning
Of a suicidal lemming
Running straight into a cabin
With a rustle and bustle
He seemed to go quite mad
And the smashing and the crashing
Delicate china now is shattered
And trophy banners tattered
As furniture was torn loose
Under the thrashing of the moose!
Crazy moose moose moose moose
Moose moose moose
With the romping and the stomping of the moose!
~~~
Kudos to who knows what the poem style was modeled after- I may share more on the inspiration depending on results. Beat THAT you...writing type people!!
The crazy moose-
Fire
Two Eskimos sitting in a kayak were chilly, but when they lit a fire in the craft it sank- proving once and for all that you can't have your kayak and heat it, too.
Leaf Muncher
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Oh my...
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I don't believe it...
*will be back later on..*
"Before humans destroy the planet?" Ellie asked.
Malcolm sighed, and closed his eyes.
"Oh dear," he said.
"That's the last thing I would worry about."
~Ian Malcolm
Leaf Muncher
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a few uploading moments later...
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I thought I was the only one that included mad Moose into forms of art! After hearing your poem I ran to my room dug out my sketch book.. (this is where i sketch all my drawings) and scanned in my mad moose picture!! Sadley i can't make it small... forgive me all in advance
See? I drew this one ages ago! Isn't it.. so meaningful??
And now to unlease more insain picture onto you all in a feeble attempt to prove myself worthy to the captn'!
(these were all a while ago, and in a relatively happy mood)
This is a pirate elephant.. wow... doesn't have a date on it I'm afraid as it shared it's page with numerous bad looking animals with dark sunnies..
Been meaning to show you all this one.. NO IT'S NOT A CROSS DRESSING DINOSAUR!!! (That's what everyone said at school when they saw it lol) It's my Ornithelestese girl who's streaching her neck in lunch break while having a quick ciggy..why you ask? Don't ask.
Squirrel of doom.
The title say's it all..
~Leafers~
"Before humans destroy the planet?" Ellie asked.
Malcolm sighed, and closed his eyes.
"Oh dear," he said.
"That's the last thing I would worry about."
~Ian Malcolm
Edited by: Leaf Muncher at: 11/8/01 12:46:00 am
Ovira
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LOL
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They're very cute!!
Yes I'm referring to lt Leafer's artwork, sorry cap'n don't get depressed now.
Crosdressing dinosaur?
Then what are the poeple gonna call the drawing i'm working on righjt now?
*looks fgrom Eskara to her sketchbook and back* Ehehe.
I'll just say its ALL HER FAULT!!!!
She should never ever have met me so I may have had a chance to preserve my sanity.
JKJKJK
I know that I'm a dreamer but I'm not the only one...
Snipe
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Shock and horror!
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Cap'n- the moose thing was, sniff- heart rendingly moving. And Leafers! The pirate Elephant! The Squirrel of DOOM!! This stinks, no- it absolutely reeks of GENIUS! Both of you are
sick and wrong, and you should feel oddly proud for that.
Now, let's see what I can twist out of that-
There!
So cute and furry-
how it scampers
how it scurries!
Eyes so big
and painful sweet
let's reach out
a tasty treat!
Awwww-
it's O.K. lil' fella
now don't be shy-
he's inching closer
by and by
he's got a twitch
there in his eye-
I think
he means for
me to die!
With teeth
and claws
it does attack
the "can't reach spot"
upon my back
my vertebrae his evil snack!
I faint
from loss of blood...
I awake
awash in pain
a tap
tap
tapping
I thought was rain-
was actually
the tree rat monster
most insane
gnawing upon my meaty brains!
Powerless I was at best
as the creature
built it's nest
in my skullbone-
*chocolate* that pest!
I end this tale
of furry woe
a victim
of the evil foe
My skull
is now the living room
of the wicked
Squirrel of Doom!
Cap'n Firey
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Dark Twizzler of the Soul
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Dark Twizzler of the Soul,
(aka Ode to a Pink Twizzler)
You look so sad
Laying there on the ground
The ground covered in dirt
and your pink shiny-ness
So clean
So fresh
So
Shiny
and pink
And shiny
And yet you sit there
Like a long abandoned tube of toothpaste
Half squeezed out and left for dead
Or whatever death is for toothpaste
And oh, how I mourn thee
When you once saw the light
And shimmered in the noon-day sun
And now your darker side is shown
As you bask in your dark shroud of
darkness
So very, very dark
And shoved away in the darkest part of the
dark sidewalk in the damp
clouded soil that looks so very
so
very
dark
and sad. and there you sit
shining
with small drops of dew clinging to you
sparkling in the light
but not in the dark
and i think
'oh twizzler-
how I woe thee
I blender theee
bumble'
and then I realize
that though you sit
alone and in the dark
darkly sitting in the
dark
concrete ground
its so cold and youre so
pink
i see that you could be more
so much more, and as I raise you into the light
carefully, watching the sun glisten off your
pink plasticky looking fruit juicy goodness
a sudden gust of wind takes out out of my hands
out of my life
forever
out of my grasp and into the road
where a car runs you down
and there you lay
no longer clean and pink
but dirty, and in a couple pieces
and how I look at thee
and bemoan my bootless state
and then another car runs you over
and I turn away in sadness
how I loved thee
-Brought to you by the one, the only, the infamous
FireBane the deep
"Laugh and frolick in your vile meats of evil- MEATS OF EVIL!! But know that vengence will be mine-oh how it will be mine!!" -Zim
Snipe
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::blinks::
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::jaw hangs slack.blinks.rubs nose.blinks.sniffs.collapses into heaving sobs:: Such Pathos; such shiny goodness runned over before it's expiration date...
I award this work the unheard of "Genius of unfathomable Stupidity" seal of disgruntled poems.
Leaf Muncher
Harmless Maniac
Posts: 868
(10/10/01 1:03 am)
210.50.72.238
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Right...
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
*Checks crayon packet*
Right, I though so.. that's it fire stay out of my rainbow coloured crayons, you can't handle them!! Lol.
Poor, poor, poor twizzler.. was it raspberry or strawberry? Or maybe cherry? It's a shame it kinda got run over... but once again fire you neevr cease to amaze on your poetry skills and O' how much time you must have to yourself lol.
~Leafers~
"Before humans destroy the planet?" Ellie asked.
Malcolm sighed, and closed his eyes.
"Oh dear," he said.
"That's the last thing I would worry about."
~Ian Malcolm
Pazu
Administrator
Posts: 38
(10/10/01 4:25 pm)
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Reply | Edit | Del How sad.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
And yet, stragely ironic. Like Brazil.
Um, never mind.
ShadowStriker
Administrator
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(10/12/01 7:16 pm)
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Re: Dark Twizzler of the Soul
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Very creative, FireBane. I love how you took something so innocuous as a twizzler and composed such a melodramatic poem. Brilliant!
How can we be so different and feel so much alike?...How can we feel so different and be so much alike? -- from Stellaluna
FireBane
Derranged Maniac
Posts: 621
(11/7/01 8:39 pm)
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Reviving a topic-
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Cause apparently me prose is being shown up- I must defend my reputation (or lack thereof...or lower it more)
I bet Cheez-E board will ruin my formatting, but 'tis no matter, it's the content that matters, right? I present you with:
A room with a moose
::cue more dramatic music::
Room with a Moose
Hear the bull moose in the forest
Crazy moose!
The world of rumbling grunts he makes
As he wades through marshes and lakes
How he snorts snorts snorts
And he sports sports sports
Running madly through the spray
Of the tides he seems to say
Splashing water everyway
That he’s the crazy moose!
With a deranged and mad delight
That causes wild birds to take flight
With a rustle
And a bustle
Of loose pinions in the light
Hear his mad incessant mutter
Hear him honk and hear him mutter
Bizarre sounds that are no other
Then imitations of a bus!
From his shadows he went running
With all the wits and all the cunning
Of a suicidal lemming
Running straight into a cabin
With a rustle and bustle
He seemed to go quite mad
And the smashing and the crashing
Delicate china now is shattered
And trophy banners tattered
As furniture was torn loose
Under the thrashing of the moose!
Crazy moose moose moose moose
Moose moose moose
With the romping and the stomping of the moose!
~~~
Kudos to who knows what the poem style was modeled after- I may share more on the inspiration depending on results. Beat THAT you...writing type people!!
The crazy moose-
Fire
Two Eskimos sitting in a kayak were chilly, but when they lit a fire in the craft it sank- proving once and for all that you can't have your kayak and heat it, too.
Leaf Muncher
Harmless Maniac
Posts: 982
(11/7/01 11:57 pm)
203.134.71.162
Reply | Edit | Del
Oh my...
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I don't believe it...
*will be back later on..*
"Before humans destroy the planet?" Ellie asked.
Malcolm sighed, and closed his eyes.
"Oh dear," he said.
"That's the last thing I would worry about."
~Ian Malcolm
Leaf Muncher
Harmless Maniac
Posts: 983
(11/8/01 12:43 am)
210.50.67.241
Reply | Edit | Del
a few uploading moments later...
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I thought I was the only one that included mad Moose into forms of art! After hearing your poem I ran to my room dug out my sketch book.. (this is where i sketch all my drawings) and scanned in my mad moose picture!! Sadley i can't make it small... forgive me all in advance
See? I drew this one ages ago! Isn't it.. so meaningful??
And now to unlease more insain picture onto you all in a feeble attempt to prove myself worthy to the captn'!
(these were all a while ago, and in a relatively happy mood)
This is a pirate elephant.. wow... doesn't have a date on it I'm afraid as it shared it's page with numerous bad looking animals with dark sunnies..
Been meaning to show you all this one.. NO IT'S NOT A CROSS DRESSING DINOSAUR!!! (That's what everyone said at school when they saw it lol) It's my Ornithelestese girl who's streaching her neck in lunch break while having a quick ciggy..why you ask? Don't ask.
Squirrel of doom.
The title say's it all..
~Leafers~
"Before humans destroy the planet?" Ellie asked.
Malcolm sighed, and closed his eyes.
"Oh dear," he said.
"That's the last thing I would worry about."
~Ian Malcolm
Edited by: Leaf Muncher at: 11/8/01 12:46:00 am
Ovira
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LOL
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They're very cute!!
Yes I'm referring to lt Leafer's artwork, sorry cap'n don't get depressed now.
Crosdressing dinosaur?
Then what are the poeple gonna call the drawing i'm working on righjt now?
*looks fgrom Eskara to her sketchbook and back* Ehehe.
I'll just say its ALL HER FAULT!!!!
She should never ever have met me so I may have had a chance to preserve my sanity.
JKJKJK
I know that I'm a dreamer but I'm not the only one...
Snipe
Administrator
Posts: 128
(11/8/01 12:14 pm)
209.213.222.178
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Shock and horror!
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Cap'n- the moose thing was, sniff- heart rendingly moving. And Leafers! The pirate Elephant! The Squirrel of DOOM!! This stinks, no- it absolutely reeks of GENIUS! Both of you are
sick and wrong, and you should feel oddly proud for that.
Now, let's see what I can twist out of that-
There!
So cute and furry-
how it scampers
how it scurries!
Eyes so big
and painful sweet
let's reach out
a tasty treat!
Awwww-
it's O.K. lil' fella
now don't be shy-
he's inching closer
by and by
he's got a twitch
there in his eye-
I think
he means for
me to die!
With teeth
and claws
it does attack
the "can't reach spot"
upon my back
my vertebrae his evil snack!
I faint
from loss of blood...
I awake
awash in pain
a tap
tap
tapping
I thought was rain-
was actually
the tree rat monster
most insane
gnawing upon my meaty brains!
Powerless I was at best
as the creature
built it's nest
in my skullbone-
*chocolate* that pest!
I end this tale
of furry woe
a victim
of the evil foe
My skull
is now the living room
of the wicked
Squirrel of Doom!
