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Post by Azonthus on Nov 26, 2005 22:12:18 GMT -5
Sitting by time stream
I see people flowing past
Here, gone, forever
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Vira Redclaw
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Noble Dreamhome - Gorgosaurus
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Post by Vira Redclaw on Nov 26, 2005 23:38:21 GMT -5
Ooh, this one paints an image in my head really well. I'm sorry I couldn't give any constructive critcism on any of your poems, I'm not that knowledgeable when it comes to poems, I'm just learning myself. But I do like them all.  |
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