Oktobrr poem-

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Snipe
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Walking
rather not
paying attention
to the
striding
dappled lighting
as it filtered through me

I seemed surprised
not really
expectant
to find the season
as it pleased
all draping
with toes scrapping
the leaf litter
below

I bowed a curtsey
formal
honor
deemed oddly normal
and kept upon my
walking way

A tap
upon my shoulder
prompted
spin to my
beholder
the spirit of
Oktobrr-
and with a mind to play

We stood
a blinking moment
hidden
chanting our intonement
sharing that whispered
silence
and then it lead
the way

The season
danced round gleeful
and I joined in the upheaval
to navigate
the people
while the ancient oaks
surround

With our spinning
now quite finished
Oktobrr heaved
diminished
and invited me up
for a cuppa tea

We sat and talked
all wondry
about marvelous
and sundry
till the sun
did sink hotly
into the sea

I bid my fond farewells
thus curtaining the spell
and walked on homeways
through the
crunching leaves.






Leaf Muncher
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PropaneInsanity
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Cool poem.... I don't know why but it reminded me of Poe. Maybe because I still have "The Raven" stuck in my head from English, or the rhythm, or the whathaveyou. I don't know. But it's a cool poem. Very cool.



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