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Post by thundertail on Oct 30, 2008 20:43:06 GMT -5
Back for another critic-check! How you like it so far? *listens to crickets* _____ The next chapter is being posted tomorrow AM. (Just finished it, but eyes tired!) This one might surprise you... So will the next two or three! I got two or three other things in store for Richard Dennison before things are revealed to him... But that would be telling!!! Oh well!... Read on, MacDuff! _____
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Post by thundertail on Jan 21, 2009 21:45:44 GMT -5
WELLLLLLLL.......! Here I am again, guys! Been really cranking away at 'No Worries!" lately. Got as far as I could go with the outlining I did. Richard's captured, and his trial is iminent... As soon as I outline the trial, I have to choriograph it right. That might take a while! Next will be what comes after that - then the end! Until I do all that, I'll have to pause posting for a little while... _ In the mean time... Let's hear how you like it! Let's hear how you hate it!... (Think this could be made into another in the series of chapter books?) What's your take on it? LMK what you think... I LOVE criticism! (LOL!)
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Post by thundertail on Feb 10, 2009 18:15:42 GMT -5
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aquila
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Post by aquila on Feb 11, 2009 23:42:50 GMT -5
Well whats all this then? You leave for half a year and someone goes and wrights a story under your nose. Thats a lotta wurdz, but I'll get to it, I like it. (x33)
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Post by thundertail on Feb 21, 2009 6:05:55 GMT -5
Well folks! There's the end of another long extravaganza! I had real fun writing this... Know why? Because if I were shipwrecked on Dinotopia, this story would be EXACTLY like how my life there would be like!... Well, minus the fame of being related to the Dennisons!... _____
I'll stop writing my stories to let you guys catch up reading 'em. I got a bunch od RL writing to proofread/edit/write, and that might take some time! Don't worry, guys! I got more Dinotopia stuff in store for you! The next one is a great one! _____
I was thinking on making another episode based on the series, and not with my own characters - with only the ones depicted in the series. (Got a basic outline for the thing right now!).
It'll be called "Picking up the pieces", where an earthquake rocks the entire island, causing great destruction, especially to the pirates' hideout. Many of them are killed, and only a handful survive. LaSage lost her memory, and thinks like the child she was before she turned pirate. As she, Quint and six or seven of the pirates recover; the island is restored; and the pirates have a big decision to make: do they turn honest or do they continue like they have?... (Of course, it'll be way more involved than that!... Only an outline so far!...) _____
Anyway, enjoy "No Worries!" for now! I'll try to start posting the other before spring really gets under way!
See you in my posts! Laters!
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