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Leaf Muncher
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A poem!
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Ok here's a poem for you all, my first attempt at a non-ryming one.. sounds a bit "iffy" now and then, ah but what the hey! Here it is...
The Night's Call
The night's call comes in many forms, but it's purpose is still the same,
It alerts all that night is comming, the day has ended,
the trees sleep,
the moon shines bright,
The nightingale sings it songs for all to hear,
telling the world that night has come,
Keepers of the night emerge and prowl the silver lands,
While others cease to resist,
The call takes them over,
Weird huh? Well at the time I could feel sleep coming to get me so i thought I'd write about it!
~Leaf Muncher~
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your peom is really cool! and I mean heaps good, Its got that deep phrases thats sounds nice when understood, thanks leafy!
breath deep, seek peace brotha, spin on your heads aiight!
--------so what if I break my ".........." neck!!!??------- Bboy_gL
Edited by: bboy gL at: 6/17/01 8:44:54 am
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good poem! the images really get across.
(bboy, tell your little animated guy to stop littering on the board! lol)
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ha ha thanks guys, Blue you read my mind, I was just thinking about GL's littering guy when i read your post! Lol
~Leaf Muncher~
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hehe, the guy under my name is the same little anime animetad guy eating some hotdog sandwich and throwing it away, I cant, because I'm the lil guy who luves hutdogs
--------so what if I break my ".........." neck!!!??------- Bboy_gL
Edited by: bboy gL at: 6/18/01 9:37:22 am
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jus testing my new animated icn, like it?ok, hehe, that dino is like, my other form, and I'm called "redneck" in that form
--------so what if I break my ".........." neck!!!??------- Bboy_gL
Edited by: bboy gL at: 6/18/01 9:41:59 am
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Cool poem, Leaf Muncher!
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Very nice Leafy! Nice 'n descriptive. Just for that I may forgive you for the whole eating the cheeselog incident...
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Nice poem, Leafy. Thanks for sharing.
Midnight
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Well for starters, how was i supposed to know that that particular cheese was infact "THE" cheese log, I mean come on! But thanks for the forgivness! GL I can't see your new Icon, it's not showing up, that might just be my comp though, so i'm sure I'll see it one day. Midnight I see you migrated to this board, Welcome! Thanks all for your comments once again all!
~Leaf Muncher~
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hm, ah think because I'm using tropd.com's file manager, much like geocities doesnt allow that remote kind of thing, im tired of signing up for new filestorage accounts, so if ya wanna see it, rightclick the icon and click properties, copy the pic's address and go to it, so anywayz, I was jus reading da egg story, and I think it rocks!! sonner or later, probably when I finished reading my "about to arrive" dinotopia book, I'll probably have more than a million ideaz in writing a fic
so... breath deep, seek peace brotha, spin on yur elbow!
--------so what if I break my ".........." neck!!!??------- Bboy_gL
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We are always ready to read a story, gL, so feel free to post or link to any fic that you write!
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The call
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To heed the call-
to return to that place within
wrapped round in night
the stars our own
these trees
and hills
sing silent thanks
the night glides past
the edges overlap and recede
a rhythm that lulls all awake
into dreaming bliss.
Thank you for the inspiration Leafy.
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A poem!
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Ok here's a poem for you all, my first attempt at a non-ryming one.. sounds a bit "iffy" now and then, ah but what the hey! Here it is...
The Night's Call
The night's call comes in many forms, but it's purpose is still the same,
It alerts all that night is comming, the day has ended,
the trees sleep,
the moon shines bright,
The nightingale sings it songs for all to hear,
telling the world that night has come,
Keepers of the night emerge and prowl the silver lands,
While others cease to resist,
The call takes them over,
Weird huh? Well at the time I could feel sleep coming to get me so i thought I'd write about it!
~Leaf Muncher~
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your peom is really cool! and I mean heaps good, Its got that deep phrases thats sounds nice when understood, thanks leafy!
breath deep, seek peace brotha, spin on your heads aiight!
--------so what if I break my ".........." neck!!!??------- Bboy_gL
Edited by: bboy gL at: 6/17/01 8:44:54 am
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good poem! the images really get across.
(bboy, tell your little animated guy to stop littering on the board! lol)
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ha ha thanks guys, Blue you read my mind, I was just thinking about GL's littering guy when i read your post! Lol
~Leaf Muncher~
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hehe, the guy under my name is the same little anime animetad guy eating some hotdog sandwich and throwing it away, I cant, because I'm the lil guy who luves hutdogs
--------so what if I break my ".........." neck!!!??------- Bboy_gL
Edited by: bboy gL at: 6/18/01 9:37:22 am
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jus testing my new animated icn, like it?ok, hehe, that dino is like, my other form, and I'm called "redneck" in that form
--------so what if I break my ".........." neck!!!??------- Bboy_gL
Edited by: bboy gL at: 6/18/01 9:41:59 am
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Cool poem, Leaf Muncher!
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Very nice Leafy! Nice 'n descriptive. Just for that I may forgive you for the whole eating the cheeselog incident...
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Nice poem, Leafy. Thanks for sharing.
Midnight
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Well for starters, how was i supposed to know that that particular cheese was infact "THE" cheese log, I mean come on! But thanks for the forgivness! GL I can't see your new Icon, it's not showing up, that might just be my comp though, so i'm sure I'll see it one day. Midnight I see you migrated to this board, Welcome! Thanks all for your comments once again all!
~Leaf Muncher~
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hm, ah think because I'm using tropd.com's file manager, much like geocities doesnt allow that remote kind of thing, im tired of signing up for new filestorage accounts, so if ya wanna see it, rightclick the icon and click properties, copy the pic's address and go to it, so anywayz, I was jus reading da egg story, and I think it rocks!! sonner or later, probably when I finished reading my "about to arrive" dinotopia book, I'll probably have more than a million ideaz in writing a fic
so... breath deep, seek peace brotha, spin on yur elbow!
--------so what if I break my ".........." neck!!!??------- Bboy_gL
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We are always ready to read a story, gL, so feel free to post or link to any fic that you write!
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The call
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To heed the call-
to return to that place within
wrapped round in night
the stars our own
these trees
and hills
sing silent thanks
the night glides past
the edges overlap and recede
a rhythm that lulls all awake
into dreaming bliss.
Thank you for the inspiration Leafy.