single serving poetry

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PropaneInsanity
easily chipped and sparky
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(11/4/02 3:39 pm)
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Well..... not really. I wrote these on a plane last week instead of doing my English.



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J'vous Reponds (aka I hate Kate Chopin's "The Storm")

Chopin, show pan
Why were you not born a man?
Certainly you could play the part
(were in not you lack the parts)
Calixta sells sex-ta
or at least she'll sell the tale.
"But they dared not yield"
Well neither will I
as I run to the WC
and vomit up the memory
of your "quivering ecstasy"
Dieu Sait why I read it at all.



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Blood Brown Eyes

My brain is tricking me again

bringing thoughts I know not to do
I feel the eyes
burrowing in again
I feel them watching
and I look to see
and hope they look away

but there we are
nose to nose
no silence in the gaze
they cut in like a Potemkin blade
like workers in revolt
and I pray to pry my eyes away

no-- my brain, she don't work that way
my brain and heart, they disagree
and so the eyes dig into me
they dig and dig and dig
and dig straight into me
until I'm blind, until I bleed

until my crying breaks the seed
and it sprouts and roots and grows in me
with lies that lie like make-sleep-tea
now I know whose eyes see
those blood brown eyes belong to me



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There are more, but they suck more then these!! One was about carrots..... geez I was bored.

Snipe
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(11/4/02 8:30 pm)
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Propane- I never knew. When faced with such work all I can do is smile sincerely, thank you for sharing and ask politely for more.

Leaf Muncher
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Lizard of Oz
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(11/5/02 3:27 am)
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Hey not bad..
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Lol, nah they are very good. Nice work.

~Leafers~
"Anthony Hopkins is seeexxxyyyy!" ~ Me (ha ha)

Minstelae
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(11/6/02 12:21 pm)
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Re: Hey not bad..
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Hehe, I likey.
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I hope you choke on it!!! - Zippo


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FireBane
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(11/15/02 7:24 pm)
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Bravo!
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For lack of being articulate at the moment- I hope this suffices; wow.

Did I mention wow?

Watched that movie based on Chopin a week or so ago- and she fell in love with that sickly dude... anyway.

Got more? I do like carrots.