Post by Azonthus on Mar 11, 2005 0:11:21 GMT -5
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To be lulled
aware by understated beauty
quiet rapture bestowed
between slow blinks
Those moments
when time looks the other way-
when a receptive heart is granted
true connection
and all the world breathes with you
To live this gift
is immeasurable.
Eskara1862
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*grins* I like.
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I actually am kinda following this poem of yours Snipe, usually I have to read a few replies from others to get the gist of them (not that they are bad, more like my skills of perception are dim) I like it, well put and what-not for a subject that seems common but often as you said "understated."...... you are talking about love right?
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I like it
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Yes Leafers- it's about Love, as are most of my poems; either about love directly or motivated or inspired by it. Not just love of a person, but of everything- that is what a poet is- a fool damned to be in love with everything. Makes for a very complicated life. Grin.
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Not surprisingly enough, the death of a truely "loved" one opened my mind to the massive (yet shockingly alike) range of Love. Sibling, Parent, Partner are the obvious ones, phenominal how many must be hidden!
~Leafers~ (Gladly eating her shrub)
I'm not going insane, I'm just going sane in a crazy world..
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To be lulled
aware by understated beauty
quiet rapture bestowed
between slow blinks
Those moments
when time looks the other way-
when a receptive heart is granted
true connection
and all the world breathes with you
To live this gift
is immeasurable.
Eskara1862
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*grins* I like.
Growing old is mandatory; Growing up is optional.
Leaf Muncher
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I actually am kinda following this poem of yours Snipe, usually I have to read a few replies from others to get the gist of them (not that they are bad, more like my skills of perception are dim) I like it, well put and what-not for a subject that seems common but often as you said "understated."...... you are talking about love right?
~Leaf Blunder~
I'm not going insane, I'm just going sane in a crazy world..
~ The Tick
Jewelspike
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I like it
Snipe
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Yes Leafers- it's about Love, as are most of my poems; either about love directly or motivated or inspired by it. Not just love of a person, but of everything- that is what a poet is- a fool damned to be in love with everything. Makes for a very complicated life. Grin.
Leaf Muncher
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Not surprisingly enough, the death of a truely "loved" one opened my mind to the massive (yet shockingly alike) range of Love. Sibling, Parent, Partner are the obvious ones, phenominal how many must be hidden!
~Leafers~ (Gladly eating her shrub)
I'm not going insane, I'm just going sane in a crazy world..
~ The Tick