Post by Azonthus on Mar 11, 2005 0:12:21 GMT -5
Leaf Muncher
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*Shrugg*
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Winding through the Jungle Path,
Panting, wretching, re-thinking past,
With jabbing thorns and stick-in-boot,
No end in sight and perhaps no loot,
Birds faintly sing in the branches,
I cannot see them past the trances,
that lull me to the thorns and not the scene,
they tell me of capture and ruptured spleen,
No point in this! you silly fool!
Should of gone the otherway - stupid mule!
through the path that's clear and bright,
not the path that's out of sight!
Legs keep walking, they know more
It's the mind that has trances and thinks more than floor,
And that is it's problem that's it's heel,
The trances know this and infect the field,
Doubt, confusion, opaque world,
Lonely, un-sure, mind in a curl
Eyes glazed, hidden from me,
is the very scene infront of me,
Mighty Stag with bound and leap,
stops before my very feet,
the trances leave, they are weak,
making me weaker - I cannot speak,
The eye's become focased, the field familiar
The stag almost smiles looking sillyer,
I laugh and smile almost weep,
once again I know my feet,
I look ahead not at thorns,
by the trees and life - and i scorn,
foolish of me to let myself slip,
into the clutches of the trances of wit,
I kick at the thorns and feel no pain,
I set out once more at good pace again,
I do not regret the path before me,
and snarl at the straight one, it bores me,
a price to pay for every choice,
I must battle the forces and control my voice,
I must be strong of mind and pure of heart,
otherwise fail and be left apart,
In this path that I see no end,
and slowely drives me round the bend.
*shrugg*
~Leaf Muncher~
I'm not going insane, I'm just going sane in a crazy world..
~ The Tick
Jewelspike
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Very nice
Methuselah827
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Sometimes if I'm really sleepy I feel just like that. Well done!
Snipe
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We each our paths
alone to take
but strength do lend
along the way
to those who struggle
to find their hearts-
A thousand lotus
blossom to them impart.
Leaf Muncher
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Cheerz all.
I'm not going insane, I'm just going sane in a crazy world..
~ The Tick
Parou
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Great piece. The image of the endless path is one I personally like.
"I just do what the little voices tell me to!" - sticker on my mate's Patrol
"If at first you don't succeed..... Skydiving is probably not for You" - sticker on my Cruisasaurus
FireBane
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::gives a claws up::
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We know I've been driving too much when I scream in fear at the mention of a narrow curving path with blind turns.... though metaphorically it is, as Parou mentioned, much preferable.
Nice job, Munch Leafers!
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*Shrugg*
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Winding through the Jungle Path,
Panting, wretching, re-thinking past,
With jabbing thorns and stick-in-boot,
No end in sight and perhaps no loot,
Birds faintly sing in the branches,
I cannot see them past the trances,
that lull me to the thorns and not the scene,
they tell me of capture and ruptured spleen,
No point in this! you silly fool!
Should of gone the otherway - stupid mule!
through the path that's clear and bright,
not the path that's out of sight!
Legs keep walking, they know more
It's the mind that has trances and thinks more than floor,
And that is it's problem that's it's heel,
The trances know this and infect the field,
Doubt, confusion, opaque world,
Lonely, un-sure, mind in a curl
Eyes glazed, hidden from me,
is the very scene infront of me,
Mighty Stag with bound and leap,
stops before my very feet,
the trances leave, they are weak,
making me weaker - I cannot speak,
The eye's become focased, the field familiar
The stag almost smiles looking sillyer,
I laugh and smile almost weep,
once again I know my feet,
I look ahead not at thorns,
by the trees and life - and i scorn,
foolish of me to let myself slip,
into the clutches of the trances of wit,
I kick at the thorns and feel no pain,
I set out once more at good pace again,
I do not regret the path before me,
and snarl at the straight one, it bores me,
a price to pay for every choice,
I must battle the forces and control my voice,
I must be strong of mind and pure of heart,
otherwise fail and be left apart,
In this path that I see no end,
and slowely drives me round the bend.
*shrugg*
~Leaf Muncher~
I'm not going insane, I'm just going sane in a crazy world..
~ The Tick
Jewelspike
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Very nice
Methuselah827
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Sometimes if I'm really sleepy I feel just like that. Well done!
Snipe
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We each our paths
alone to take
but strength do lend
along the way
to those who struggle
to find their hearts-
A thousand lotus
blossom to them impart.
Leaf Muncher
The Wonderful
Lizard of Oz
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(8/20/02 12:53 am)
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Re: *Shrugg*
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Cheerz all.
I'm not going insane, I'm just going sane in a crazy world..
~ The Tick
Parou
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Great piece. The image of the endless path is one I personally like.
"I just do what the little voices tell me to!" - sticker on my mate's Patrol
"If at first you don't succeed..... Skydiving is probably not for You" - sticker on my Cruisasaurus
FireBane
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::gives a claws up::
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We know I've been driving too much when I scream in fear at the mention of a narrow curving path with blind turns.... though metaphorically it is, as Parou mentioned, much preferable.
Nice job, Munch Leafers!